Spy Wednesday

A little late but a quick poem for the day that’s in it.

Spy Wednesday

We had the guy on camera since the weekend.

How could we not? The crowds alone had triggered

warning levels demanding our attention.

His known associates were mostly no ones.

Hookers and fishermen, small time farmers,

with nothing much to lose. Not radicals

but enough of a concern to warrant action.

Phone masts tracked him. A website signaled.

He’d booked dinner for his friends on Friday night.

We had him now. So when one approached us

and tried to sell him we could afford to laugh

at the demand for crypto and escape. We’ll send

our men to seize him in the garden. Perhaps

he knows we’re already onto him.

2 Replies to “Spy Wednesday”

  1. This text weaves a narrative about surveillance and the gamification of modern life, blending personal observations with broader societal critiques. It questions the intrusion of technology into everyday decisions and relationships, suggesting a loss of authenticity. The metaphors used highlight the absurdity of applying gaming logic to life’s milestones. Why do we let technology dictate so much of our behavior?

  2. This poem captures the tension of surveillance and the inevitability of being caught, even in the most mundane moments. The detailed description of tracking methods highlights the pervasiveness of modern monitoring. The blending of life’s unexpected twists with technological metaphors feels both timely and thought-provoking. The reference to cultural sayings adds a layer of universality to the theme of life’s unpredictability. Do you think the poem suggests that technology has stripped away the authenticity of human experience?

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